The Broken Review.

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I honestly don’t even know where to start with this review. It was so bad, I just couldn’t stomach it. I read some of the reviews before starting to read it, but I wanted to keep an open mind. You know, not every book that gets bad reviews is actually bad. In fact, there were people that liked this. I, however, am not one of them.

The main character, River, is this petite “perfect” looking blonde girl with big tits and a big ass. Anything to do with her love interest, Sammy, she would stop breathing. Like, really? She was useless and helpless and just so Mary Sue. Reliant on a man to make her happy. I understand that she was trapped in an abusive relationship and people in those situations don’t always feel like they can get out, but this was just beyond. Everyone other woman in this book slutty and mean. Nothing like the playful, coy demeanor of River. (Please note my sarcasm.) Every man that wasn’t her brother wanted River because she was just “so hot.”

Written differently, this book could have been decent. I mean way differently. I do like dark novels. I am not too hard of a sell when it comes to a great story. Unfortunately, this book was just about twenty shades of bad. I will say that the only positive is that I didn’t have to pay for it.


1 star

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